The Dandelion
This is a story that I've wrote a while back. I entered a contest and submitted it and didn't keep a copy for myself.. So I figured I'd just post it here to keep it as a remembrance. 
Once  upon a time, there was a dandelion. She was the happiest dandelion of  all because she was very contented with what she had. She lived in the  middle of a meadow which extended as far as the horizon went. That was  her whole world. She had never been out of the meadow thus she had no  idea what was out there. But it didn't matter. She didn't have the  slight bit of interest to know anyway.
Every morning she woke up  refreshed by the morning dew hanging on her florets. By day she watched  the clouds passing by and observed how they transformed into all kinds  of shapes. She counted the sheep that came feasting on the grass and be  amused as the Australian Shepherd rushed the sheep to go home. By night  she gazed at the stars and wondered if the stars were gazing at her as  well. And before she went to sleep she smiled to herself and said, "This  is how life should be."
One day, there came a little boy. The  moment the dandelion set her eyes upon him, she knew immediately she had  fallen in love. He was the most beautiful thing she had ever seen. When  he laughed she felt that she could listen to this sweet sound for the  rest of her life. When he smiled she wished that the time would freeze  and she could look at this face forever. The little boy came to the  meadow every day. And every day, the dandelion hoped to catch his  attention. But there was no way that little boy could notice a four-inch  high dandelion. She watched him teased one of the sheep and played with  the Australian Shepherd. She watched him ran around the meadow all day  without any particular purpose then laughed as he gasped for breath.  When night fell, she looked forward to seeing him the next day. And she  thought, "This is how life should be."
Then one day, the little  boy finally saw the dandelion. He bent over and examined her curiously.  The dandelion thought her dream was, after all, becoming true. She felt a  sharp pain and before she knew it, she was very far from the ground,  held gently in the boy's hands. Her realization crept in - he plucked  her from her stem! The little boy was smiling at her. A gush of wind  brushed past her and suddenly, her seed parachutes went flying away. The  little boy threw what was left of her on the ground and ran excitedly  around the seed parachutes. The dandelion landed with a soft thud  inaudible to the little boy's ears. She watched helplessly as he ran  further and further away. She knew her life was coming to an end. She  said to herself, "This is how life should be." She never regret loving  that boy. That moment, that brief moment when he held her in his hands -  that was the moment she would always remember. 
 
 
 
          
      
 
  
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
8 comments:
hey..i noticed the place on the banner...
you have a knack at writing, the story though poignant, carries a deep meaning, sometime things that we hoped for may destroy us..good one ;)
Thanks :) I like how different people interpret this story differently :)
Its nice to re-read this story again :) You forgot to mention, you won that contest too...! 1st runner up right?
Very pretty story.
Tien, yeah I think it's 1st or 2nd runner up :) Forgot which.
getyourselfconnected (lolz), thanks for the compliment :)
I didn't make comment earlier on coz read these before but just know u won prize?? - this proved Malaysia got talent in shin loo & congrats
nicely wrote... there was a little dark side of the story, how the dandelion was hoping to be pluck, how the boy played and killed that flower,... yet, you bring it to such a beautiful ending,... at the few last moments, although short, is the happiest of all! it's better to have loved and die, than not to have loved at all...
p/s: congratulations! ^^
-that is how life should be~!
Robinson, thanks :)
Shinyin, once again, I really like how different people interpret this story differently. Good to know you like it :)
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