I'm impressed, that was very good! I loved the intimacy of the narrative voice of your POV characters. How we're privy to their innermost thoughts and reactions to a single terrible event. I also found it very poignant this theme of lovers who have grown apart and now will never get the chance to mend this rift between them.
Very powerful stuff, Shin Loo. Thanks for sharing.
Ok i thought u r in agony - Voted & the rasuah done :D ..Good effort to be a start-up novelist? (but the usage of bombastic or powerful word is still novice compared to established writers)
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I'm impressed, that was very good! I loved the intimacy of the narrative voice of your POV characters. How we're privy to their innermost thoughts and reactions to a single terrible event. I also found it very poignant this theme of lovers who have grown apart and now will never get the chance to mend this rift between them.
Very powerful stuff, Shin Loo. Thanks for sharing.
Ok i thought u r in agony - Voted & the rasuah done :D ..Good effort to be a start-up novelist? (but the usage of bombastic or powerful word is still novice compared to established writers)
david : wow thanks man... don't know what to say... you gave me praises that i don't deserve man... haha... thanks...
robinson : yes i know LOL... thanks for your rasuah too...
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